My hot take on Nike is that it’s all about the headline. My hot take on John Lewis/Waitrose is that it’s all about the endline. The ability of copywriters to turn big thoughts into short, memorable lines is still the most magical part of advertising.
‘See it. Say it. Sorted.’ A line that deftly employs the rule of three, uses rhythm and rhyme as a mnemonic device, and couches a clear directive in five simple, everyday words. And yet still somehow it’s a terrible line.
Surprised that Amazon’s Christmas ad is being billed as either Turkey of the Week (Campaign) or ad of the decade (System 1 / The Drum). Before seeing the commentary, I watched it and thought it was pretty generic and didn’t inspire much strong feeling either way.
I welcome…
So here is the full Jungian reading of the John Lewis ad that you know you need.
The Venus flytrap is consumer capitalism. By the end, it is vomiting out presents to an acquisitive family who were queasy about allowing it into the house, and now feel guilty about shoving it out…
GODDAMNIT! Kit Gammell's dad is problematic oil tycoon Bill Gammell!
And I believe his brother is Mike Gammell, founder of Days non-alcohol beer!
He can lend you more than a tenner Kit!
Gen Z, you are being played!
To the streets!
First look at some work I’ve been doing with
@CD_and_Co
for
@AntarcticSF
Trying to find a visual and verbal language for talking about climate in a way that cuts through and evokes hope rather than despair. More on LinkedIn.
#Antarctica
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I think of this as 'Mock the Week' copywriting, where the writers walk up to the mic and riff on a given theme. But as a punter, it feels like walking in halfway through and wondering what the set-up is. Wait, is this about Uber doing trains? How does that work exactly? Can you…
Weird irony that ‘long copy ads’ now live on mainly as a visual aesthetic. Everyone knows the right typefaces and layouts to use, but no one knows how to write them.
Might as well as have a classic Twitter logo row about this one. Yes, technically they're keeping the dead lion on the classic tin, so they'll retain the world record for oldest unchanged brand packaging. But they're dropping / modernising the lion for the plastic tubes &…
Never sure how well this stuff goes over on Twitter, but I’ll repost it from Instagram anyway – a response to the trump tweet from a writer
#realtime_notes
Lots of thoughts about this – the brilliantly humanising effect of a mistake, the humdrum day-to-day relationship of writing and design – but the main thing is I’m surprised the copy started out even longer
"Purpose didn’t create most of the great brands and ads. Creativity did" writes Nick Ashby in his new book which examines how brand purpose intoxicated the marketing world, and the negative impact he feels it has wrought
One change I'd like to see in all awards schemes: a period of two years from launch before you can enter any 'for good' project. See if it does some good and show you're in it for the long haul.
The Lloyds campaign seems like the 'control' in an effectiveness experiment: what happens if we keep the massive media spend the same, but dial the messaging / creative / content as close as possible to zero?
Some news...
After 3 years, 5 months, 5 days and 2,113 poems, I believe I have finished
#Realtime_Notes
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There will be one last book and it is available to pre-order now.
It has been a wonderful journey through the weirdest of times.
Surprised RNIB went with this – whole point of alt text is to describe without editorialising, which shows respect to the reader and leaves them free to read in their own metaphors and meanings. It's a service to the reader, not a knock-yourself-out creative writing assignment.
Some late-night sloganeering efforts using an innovative bulldog-clip-assisted flipchart system for agile sloganeering, copyright Sue Asbury (creative commons)
#trumpukvisit
New post from Thoughts on Writing: an eight-part essay on the importance of cognitive empathy (the skill of perspective-taking) in advertising and other forms of persuasion.
Lots of these campaigns around in recent years, but something feels off about them.
The reality is almost certainly that a pattern of under-investment, rising fares and poor service has led to more isolated staff and frustrated customers. (1/4)
Everyone saying 'everyone needs to calm down about the WHSmith rebrand' needs to calm down!
First, if it's indeed a very public testing exercise across ten stores, then part of the point is to get a reaction. It's part of the test! If everyone shuts up, or tone-polices those who…
Ad campaigns often go wrong when agencies don’t think about how one execution will look when divorced from the rest of the campaign. Should be a name for it – the Lost Sheep Effect maybe.
Six years ago, I created a bot called
@botconference
Every three hours since then, it has been tweeting quotes from a non-existent perpetual advertising conference. I believe it continues to deliver more value than
#CannesLions2022
Really great to get this opportunity to write about 1000 days of Realtime Notes – The Guardian is the place where many of the poems have started
#realtime_notes
Up next is the Writing for Design category… and it’s Twenty years of welcomes for The British Library by Tom Sharp from the
@poetryofitall
who takes the gold! Well done!
#DWA19
#DWAwards19
For anyone interested, I started the decade by blogging about all the 'Mr' shops on Britain's high streets, in the guise of Mr Blog. Probably the funniest and funnest thing I've done online – should do it again one day.
Anyone interested in language should follow
@Anthony_Etherin
– here are four recent poems to save me retweeting them all.
They somehow find a lovely lyricism even in the most extreme formal conditions – like those weird luminous creatures that survive in deep sea trenches.
Nothing wrong with copying popular memes for an ad – there’s a certain skill to it, and I'd be happy to have done it. But I’d also mention in the tweet and press release that it’s not actually my line, because it just seems weird not to.