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#LineByLineTime, the excitement of the mini-critique hour begins in 5 minutes. Tonight, share an "Unsettling" moment that spooks a character. Morẻ—> https://t.co/wvyNzAmFam
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@graestonewriter #linebylinetime This was an exercise in using 100% dialogue to tell a story. No action beats, no dialogue tags.
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@graestonewriter Here's a silly scene, where Alessandro (a vet) must take on a tricky patient 😅😅😅 #Linebylinetime
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@graestonewriter From South of Home. One of the few times Maggie has insecurities about herself. #LineByLineTime
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@SilverAbby84 @graestonewriter #linebylinetime WOW! It sounds so terrifying, but then that's a normal, mortal way of existing in the world. To transmit sheer terror for experiencing what's normal to me is the mark of a master. Exceptionally well done!
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@graestonewriter #LineByLineTime This is from my untitled (loosely) Greco-Roman inspired fantasy. Orianna, trained as a fighter, has not been admitted to the Protectors Guild (emergency services) and is taking with her adoptive mother about it.
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@graestonewriter From my Kindle Vella: Haven. Kieran and Aidan are on the hunt...but NOT for a kirin. I wrote this and discovered that it's hard to keep Kieran and kirin separate. :D #Linebylinetime
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@graestonewriter It's not as many words as it looks like. I just made them bigger to make it easier to read. From Haven, my Vella. >:D A nosey owlycat. #LineByLineTime (I got distracted and almost missed!)
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@graestonewriter From my short story, Down by the Bay. Luellen holds an unbearable amount of guilt over the death of her childhood best friend, Tessie. #LineByLineTime
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@graestonewriter From The Outskirts of Broken. Sissy has Tourette's. Since it takes place in 1960 and the Deep South, there is yet a diagnosis for her. She refers to her tics as "urges." #LineByLineTime
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@graestonewriter Oops, almost forgot and after I'd taken the time to dig up a wintry scene! From Prequel Novel #3: Fae going out in winter to fulfill customs after the birth of Ryn's son. #linebylinetime
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In Two Hours’ time: "Unsettling." Choose a scene that scares a character. Morẻ—> https://t.co/wvyNzAmFam
#WritingCommunity #minicritique #querying #amwriting #indiewriter #amrevising #novel
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@graestonewriter From The Outskirts of Broken. Sissy has undiagnosed Tourette Syndrome and is constantly ridiculed. When her tics or 'urges' as she calls them get bad or out of her control, she resorts to hurting herself. #LineByLineTime
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@SilverAbby84 @Amaris_Faith @graestonewriter #linebylinetime What Abby said!!! Yes, this is brilliant and the reveal is so devastating.
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@graestonewriter I tried to find a more recent snip, but Gracie remains my queen of flashbacks. This is from Visions of Fire, the second novel in my trilogy. Here she's dreaming of her aunt, Adora, and her father, Gabriel. #LineByLineTime
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@graestonewriter From the beginning of Merry's novel. I know you're not "supposed" to have an introductory mirror scene, but there are enough odd things going on with Merry that I felt like it was more interesting than cliche. #LineByLineTime
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@graestonewriter I took the prompt literally. Hiding something. :D From my free novel I'm writing this month, Wrong Turn at the Spring. #LineByLineTime,
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