
Zack Riley π¦πΊ
@ColdHeart_Prj
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Fantasy author, constructive critical reviewer, father of 3, veteran. I draw, House Atreides, sometimes I tell dad jokes, and he laughs. Navy Veteran π¦πΊ
Sydney, New South Wales
Joined April 2017
πKindle Unlimited Editionπ Guardians, dragon-like plasma creatures, haunt Earth's ruins, glowing by night & invisible by day. Corrupt governments battle for control as rebel factions fight for freedom. It all hangs on a mysterious canister containing a secret that could save or
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Monday... going to drive the old girl to work today. She myght be a 1987 model but still greener then any electric car out there π
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Home stretch now, Chapter 31. So 30 is done with a major rewrite and about 2500 words shaved. I still need to do one more round but I'm happy with the result. 31 is time to setup for the climax but I need to add in that everyone gets sick and explain the fight back at the fort.
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Good morning everyone. Stay safe for those in NSW today.its going to be a stormy afternoon
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How much I enjoy Esmarelda calling Lydus a Jackal-tit, (Idiot in the Canid tongue)
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Tonight's accountability post. Mid way through Chapter 30 edits. Back on to the slow burn romance chapters that end in tragedy, but this chapter isn't the end of Ezzy and Lydus's relationship... even if he almost dies and is now parallelized from the waist down. #amediting
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Awe man, looking at Thomas Fischbach's latest email makes me want to write a modern AU version of Arillion where the characters are just living their lives.
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And that is the chapter 29 rewrite done! Finally. #amediting
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Well... This takes me way back! Nice to start seeing where inspirations from my childhood have effected my writing
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Super excited to see it all coming together. Shading in the background is done. Kolin, his yonger sister Kaids and Gina. Artist is @/sagebrushstuff
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Accountability post for tonight - So here I am again with Chapter 29. I am getting towards the pointy end but the deeper I get into Cold Heart, the more I am finding myself in this situation of major rewrites. It will all be worth it in the end though #ameditng #writingcommunity
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Last night I removed 765word from chapter 29. Shifting the fort responsibility to Ellie means theres a lot of redundant non-important filler that can be cut. I don't think it adds anything to the story now anyway so that's a posative as i need to shave 60k words
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Super excited to see that shading. I loved how Kolin and Kaida turned out. Good to see how well @/sagebrushstuff has done capturing the brother and sister. I cant wait to get the full image blown up into a poster.
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The Americans and the Poms are yet to enter the race π
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